Post Number: 2263
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 2:16 am: || |
From the web site:
"Never A Vow" The book. Coming Soon in 2009
Your web site is pathetically unreadable! Your also need to decide if the subject of the book is the victim or Cornerstone.
Seriously, if you want to sell this book and raise some money for the victim, you need to engage the services of an editor.
Post Number: 76
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 4:24 am: || |
Mike g- agreed... I can't make heads or tails of this site...
Post Number: 518
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 5:15 am: || |
As my g'ma used to say, "bless her heart".
Post Number: 133
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 11:25 am: || |
So what does this have to do with Cornerstone School again? I don't know why I should care that a non-classroom employee had a fucked up personal life.
Post Number: 1229
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 1:59 pm: || |
Looks like someone hopes that including Clark Durant and Cornerstone Schools in the promo. material will help sell books.
"But if they are attempting to teach the children to take responsibility for their own actions, employees should take responsibility for their actions as well."
I didn't realize that my employer was responsible for my personal behavior outside of work.
Post Number: 134
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 2:05 pm: || |
So, in other words, you are full of shit.
Post Number: 1340
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 2:18 pm: || |
huh? and my husband can't get his book sold...what a crock!
why do you have to type 'E Nevada' after every mention of Cornerstone Schools?
the whole thing is very poorly written...what is it that you are attempting to communicate?
Post Number: 520
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 2:30 pm: || |
I applaud anyone for trying - but you need to be professional and make sure your product is without error. Hire an editor or just have a really smart friend read over it and edit it for you. If the website wasn't ready, it shouldn't have been launched and advertised, and if the website writer also wrote the book....
If there's a story here, I'd suggest you take it all down, revamp it, and try again, because right now you're leaving a very bad impression of your work, and you know what they say about first impressions.
Self publishing is the way to go these days, Mrsjdaniels! Has your husband looked into that?
Post Number: 84
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 2:44 pm: || |
I am not familiar with the incident Neveravow is presenting here. I cannot tell what the "truth" is from what has been presented thus far. I don't know any of the parties involved. But the tone of the website is subjective, emotional and biased.
So, I would recommend an attorney in addition to an editor before someone sues you for slander.
I also wonder if you had permission to publish someone's personal notes.
That's why I don't believe in diaries or journals.
Post Number: 70
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 3:56 pm: || |
Was there a release form? Is this a true story...Why not change the names...I smell a lawsuit...
Post Number: 136
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 5:01 pm: || |
What happened to that Neveravow douche? Kind of defeats the purpose of the thread if he's gone.
Post Number: 1907
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 5:17 pm: || |
Post Number: 5
|Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 8:07 pm: || |
Post Number: 145
|Posted on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 12:29 pm: || |
You keep mentioning the 'Southfield Hilton' in your rant...is this the current Hilton Garden Inn property? I know the owners, George Benton was the manager there and has been for a while now, who is this Greg S. you keep mentioning?
Post Number: 361
|Posted on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 2:46 pm: || |
Late to this thread, I now see that 'Neveravow' evidently followed sage advice from Chrissy_snow to "take it all down, revamp it and try again" . . .
. . . or at least heeded step No. 1. Blank screen greets www.neveravow.com visitors presently, though I scrolled briefly through the hodgepodge preserved via cache memory (bless 'ya again, Google).
"Subjective, emotional and biased" is a kind understatement, Locke.
Neveravow deserves his public pummeling as much as Jim Cramer.
Post Number: 139
|Posted on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 4:28 pm: || |
Translation: polishing a turd.