  Mikeg Member Username: Mikeg Post Number: 2263 Registered: 12-2005 |
From the web site: quote: Your web site is pathetically unreadable! Your also need to decide if the subject of the book is the victim or Cornerstone. Seriously, if you want to sell this book and raise some money for the victim, you need to engage the services of an editor. | ||
Nickstone Member Username: Nickstone Post Number: 76 Registered: 02-2006 |
Mike g- agreed... I can't make heads or tails of this site... | ||
Chrissy_snow Member Username: Chrissy_snow Post Number: 518 Registered: 07-2008 |
As my g'ma used to say, "bless her heart". | ||
Benfield Member Username: Benfield Post Number: 133 Registered: 06-2008 |
So what does this have to do with Cornerstone School again? I don't know why I should care that a non-classroom employee had a fucked up personal life. | ||
Novine Member Username: Novine Post Number: 1229 Registered: 07-2007 |
Looks like someone hopes that including Clark Durant and Cornerstone Schools in the promo. material will help sell books. "But if they are attempting to teach the children to take responsibility for their own actions, employees should take responsibility for their actions as well." I didn't realize that my employer was responsible for my personal behavior outside of work. | ||
Benfield Member Username: Benfield Post Number: 134 Registered: 06-2008 |
So, in other words, you are full of shit. | ||
Mrsjdaniels Member Username: Mrsjdaniels Post Number: 1340 Registered: 08-2005 |
huh? and my husband can't get his book sold...what a crock! why do you have to type 'E Nevada' after every mention of Cornerstone Schools? the whole thing is very poorly written...what is it that you are attempting to communicate? | ||
Chrissy_snow Member Username: Chrissy_snow Post Number: 520 Registered: 07-2008 |
I applaud anyone for trying - but you need to be professional and make sure your product is without error. Hire an editor or just have a really smart friend read over it and edit it for you. If the website wasn't ready, it shouldn't have been launched and advertised, and if the website writer also wrote the book.... If there's a story here, I'd suggest you take it all down, revamp it, and try again, because right now you're leaving a very bad impression of your work, and you know what they say about first impressions. Self publishing is the way to go these days, Mrsjdaniels! Has your husband looked into that? | ||
Locke09 Member Username: Locke09 Post Number: 84 Registered: 02-2009 |
I am not familiar with the incident Neveravow is presenting here. I cannot tell what the "truth" is from what has been presented thus far. I don't know any of the parties involved. But the tone of the website is subjective, emotional and biased. So, I would recommend an attorney in addition to an editor before someone sues you for slander. I also wonder if you had permission to publish someone's personal notes. That's why I don't believe in diaries or journals. | ||
Marianewtothed Member Username: Marianewtothed Post Number: 70 Registered: 05-2007 |
Was there a release form? Is this a true story...Why not change the names...I smell a lawsuit... | ||
Benfield Member Username: Benfield Post Number: 136 Registered: 06-2008 |
What happened to that Neveravow douche? Kind of defeats the purpose of the thread if he's gone. | ||
Professorscott Member Username: Professorscott Post Number: 1907 Registered: 12-2006 |
Ran screaming. | ||
Neveravow Member Username: Neveravow Post Number: 5 Registered: 12-2008 |
Revising... | ||
Detroitchef Member Username: Detroitchef Post Number: 145 Registered: 09-2008 |
Hey Neveravow, You keep mentioning the 'Southfield Hilton' in your rant...is this the current Hilton Garden Inn property? I know the owners, George Benton was the manager there and has been for a while now, who is this Greg S. you keep mentioning? | ||
Realitycheck Member Username: Realitycheck Post Number: 361 Registered: 08-2004 |
Late to this thread, I now see that 'Neveravow' evidently followed sage advice from Chrissy_snow to "take it all down, revamp it and try again" . . . . . . or at least heeded step No. 1. Blank screen greets www.neveravow.com visitors presently, though I scrolled briefly through the hodgepodge preserved via cache memory (bless 'ya again, Google). "Subjective, emotional and biased" is a kind understatement, Locke. Neveravow deserves his public pummeling as much as Jim Cramer. | ||
Benfield Member Username: Benfield Post Number: 139 Registered: 06-2008 |
quote: Translation: polishing a turd. |
